GwynlasDyn16's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Solid Start]

e_O
More or less, ~but there is a room of things to improve~

The piano could be better and not so "Ding", "Ding", and not make it so boring and fluid what piano is with the soundtrack :/

Also, their music is not Jazz at all, it's more like Synthwave or Drum N/& Bass, and the soundtrack is a little catchy, I recommend that you don't do it like that, and put more mixes on it, but not to make it so fluid and so empty @_@

For the rest, it needs to be improved and more mixes and soundtrack added!

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

Do better piano, more mixing, more soundtrack and not make it so sticky and fluid
3/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

[bye]

Your music is great! ^-^

The truth is, the sounds are interesting and somewhat ambient to be honest (although I don't like Hip Hop - Olskool music but that doesn't matter xD)

I don't see any problems with your music, it's all very well done, good job! But the only problem is that your music ended very quickly :l

Be careful, a good ending should have some kind of falling action before the cut, you have to remember that, but the sounds and the soundtrack are very well done and needs no changes, congratulations! :D

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None, it just improves the ending and that's it
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

[The Wanderer]

O.O
Your audio turned out quite nice, it was great! :D

But the only problem why I give 4 and a half stars is because the label that says "epic-drop" doesn't fit it well and on top of that your music is more Trance than Techno e_e

I would tell you to improve the parts of the drop, because an epic drop would have to be more intense and more about mixing and soundtrack, but be careful, it does not mean that you have to change the soundtrack (or something like that o_O) Just improve the parts of the drop, and just don't change anything else, but the soundtrack and the monotones it has were very beautiful :)

But still, I really appreciate your music, I only recommend improving the drop and that's it, otherwise, I see no problem. Congratulations! 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None, just improve the drop
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

AlastReYn responds:

Thank you for your assessment

[Mystery in the Garage]

Excelente tono y buenas mezclas (^-^)

Eso sí, te podría decir que hagas mezclas de sonidos y ritmos ya que tu audio en sí es un poquito aburrido (pero no tanto xd), ah por cierto, ¡no sabía que eres Hispano! o_O

Regresando a los sonidos, mejora un poco más los monótonos haciendo más mezclas de ello, y luego no hacerlo tan repetitivo >_>

Por lo demás, está muy bien, y de verdad, lo hiciste mucho mejor que la música anterior que le hice una reseña, ¡muy bien! 8)

~{=COSAS A/PARA MEJORAR=}~

Más mezclas de sonidos y ritmos, hacer mejor los monótonos y no hacerlo repetitivo y un poquito aburrido

-¡De nada! 8)
3,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

[Touhou - Bad Apple!!]

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Really cool! Great, but...

Actually, your music, more than Heavy Metal, is more a mix of Electronic Rock, Electronic Pop and Techno genres (So ​​I recommend that you put your music on General Rock or Miscellaneous), and I would recommend that you capture a little more of the "Pop" (so to speak) that the original music has (but you do capture it like 60%, but that's fine ;P) Otherwise it's excellent, and you applied the original rhythm for the electric guitar, and really, it turned out fantastic! :D

Otherwise, it does not need any further improvement 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

None, it's simply capturing a little more of the "Pop" that the original music has and that's it
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

Treviabot92-Virstein responds:

I'd personally more refer to it as a power metal cover if I could. Sadly, that (sub)genre isn't an option, so I instead use the heavy metal umbrella that it objectively belongs to.

The way I rendered the song was more meant to evoke nostalgia for an era of gaming not seen since the early 90s than it was to be a one-to-one recreation of how it appeared in various Touhou-related media. If I cover a song with the express purpose of making it as close to the original as possible, it's like it would be better if I hadn't covered it at all. At that point, there would be little merit in the piece for it to be called transformative use.

For you, I would recommend you give a listen to some power metal bands to see what exactly I'm trying to get at with my music. I doubt I'll ever hold a candle to the likes of Sabaton, DragonForce, Turisas, or Brothers of Metal, but hey, a guy can try. And I've definitely been trying for some fifteen-odd years, I'd like to think I've grown.

Thanks for the review!

[RobTop on the Dancefloor]

Robert Nicholas Christian Topala On E

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

[Omega]

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The truth is, the sounds are great,

Your music is not so "Industrial", it is more like Techno in fusion with Chipstep, but Industrial is not so much, I tell you, put your music in Miscellaneous or fusion, or choose those 2 genres that I told you,

Let's see, the sounds are good, good soundtrack but it is very catchy, and there is almost no soundtrack e-e

Oh and I recommend that you improve the ending (Or is it a Loop? I have no idea :P), be careful, a good ending should have some type of falling action before the cut, I would tell you to do the ending with a drum instrument, and that's it 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

Improve the ending, make more soundtrack and put the correct genre

-Have a good end of the year and you're welcome!
4/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

LGmusic responds:

Thanks for the feedback, its not a loop I just struggle with composition a lot. I appreciate you looking in depth thats really cool :)

[Lost At A Sleepover - Cover]

Relaxing and very good soundtrack (~.~),

Seriously, it turned out very cool and beautiful, it's like I was in a place of beautiful flowers, in a nice waterfall, beautiful! ^-^

Really, good job, but the only problem is that your music after passing minute 1:26 there is absolutely nothing, it is empty, I recommend that you look for an audio editor (or something) so that you cut your music to minute 1:26 exactly, and I recommend that you make your music a little more fluid (but not that much), Otherwise, I really appreciate it! And I also recommend that you put your music on Ambient

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

Simply trim your music to exactly 1:26 and make the audio a little smoother (but not that much)

-You're welcome! 8)
4,5/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

[METALLIC]

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Excellent mixes, really, very good! But...

Your music is not Drum N/& Bass at all, it is more a great mix of genres of Hard Rock, Industrial Rock, Hard Trance, Techno, Electronic Rock, Punk, etc. (Seriously, there are too many genres in your music xD) So I recommend that you put your music in Industrial or Miscellaneous,

Now let's see... In terms of sound, I tell you that if you have a very good soundtrack that is mixed with those that are the Electric Guitar, that is what I liked the most about your music, but still, I tell you to make more soundtrack and more mixes with the electric guitar, and I recommend that you look for an audio editing program (or something), so that you can cut your music to minute 3:33 or 3:32, since the rest is empty :/

And also, do the monotones a little better and more rhythms with the electric guitar...

Otherwise, I loved it, I appreciate it very much 8)

~{=THINGS TO IMPROVE=}~

Trim the audio at 3:33 or 3:32, make more rhythms with the electric guitar and more soundtrack, improve the monotones, and put your music to Miscellaneous or Industrial
4/5

//~SSJ4-Valentin15

chris-marcell responds:

Wow! Thanks for the help